DESCRIPTIVE - PEOPLE

1. My Best Friend.

Nora is my best friend in school. She is a ……………………………… girl with ………………. She and I first met at kindergarten and we became great friends. She is kind.. ………………………………………….. We ……………….are classmates and we …………………… to school together every morning.

Nora …………………….. to joke and play games. She …………………………… near my house. In the evenings, we usually …………………….. at my house. We …………………. in the garden and ……………………. story books. She is good ……………….. Mathematics. So, whenever I find difficulties in my Mathematics homework, I would ask her to ………… me. Sometimes, when my parents …………….. out in the evening, she …………………….. over to ………………….. me company and we ……………………….. television together. That way I do not feel lonely.

I hope Nora and I will be in the same class again next year. I like her very much and she is my best friend.

[To me, she is my role model. When I grow up, I want to be like her. That would certainly make my parents very happy – to have a daughter who is not only successful, but also respectful to everyone.] - CONCLUDE

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2. My Best Friend.

A best friend is the first person who comes in when, out of the door, the whole world has gone. There are lots of people who you make friendship with, but it is very hard to find a true and honest friend. But I am very lucky that I have a best friend with whom I can share my feelings and divide grief with. His name is Johan. He is very …………………………, and I am very happy to have him as my best friend. He is very ……………………………, and an ………………………………… person.

First, Johan has all those friendly habits that we seek in a friend such as friendly behavior and respectfulness. He is very …………………………… and friendly person. For example, to be more respectful person, if anybody comes to his house, he welcomes him or her to come in and ask to have a seat and then he ask him or her to have something to drink very nicely. He is also ……………………. person. For instance, he helps his parents in their work such as mowing the lawn and cleaning the house. He also helps his mother preparing the dinner and helps her in washing the dishes.

………………………., Johan is a hardworking and a very punctual person. He likes doing his work on time. For example, he always does his homework and gives it to the teacher whenever it is due. He always attends his classes and prepare for his tests and quizzes. And to keeps his grade up in all classes, he studies hard for tests and quizzes. On the other hand, he works a part time job, so he could make his pocket money. But also sometimes he works overtime on the weekend to makes more money for his future studies for college.

Finally, Johan is a very honest friend. He is very well mannered and organized person. He loves the truth and hate lying.

3. My teacher

If it was not for her, I would not have progressed this far. To most of us, primary school education is fun and joyfulness but to me it was a painstaking experience. All my classmates would be scoring full marks or close to it but my score would be barely reaching the pass mark. I had several tuition teachers but none of them was like her. She was my turning point in my life. Her patience and faith she had on me made me preserve. No matter how long I took to absorb the facts, she neither give up nor lost her patience on me. Once it took me about 3 hours to observe the pattern in term of reading the clock. She never lost it. She was very innovative, as she gets hold anything nearby and use it as a teaching tool just to get me understand and have a good grasp of what she had taught. She was always kind and genuine. 

Apart from tutoring, she had other commitments. Even till today, I admire her time management. She had to look after her family, her career and she was also upgrading herself, even in her forties. It inspired me. She had an everlasting thirst for knowledge. Ever since then it is my passion to attain all-rounded education. Despite her hectic schedule, she gave her best in tutoring. It is from her I learn to strive for the best and give the best in whatever I do.

I am sure I can be the one who could make a difference in someone else life. It’s my passion and desire.

DESCRIPTIVE – PEOPLE  [LOCATE THE SIMPLE IDEAS/ GOOD IDEAS]

The Person I Admire Most

          The person I admire most is none other than my aunt, Mak Su Midah. She is my mother’s youngest sister. I love Mak Su Midah because she is a responsible and understanding person.

          Mak Su Midah stands 161 cm, with a petite, slim figure. She has fair complexion, smiling eyes and lustrous, black, shoulder-length hair. Her face is as smooth as silk, and she has rosy cheeks and pink lips. Being a successful businesswoman, she holds herself very well and has the charm and grace to go with it. Mak Su Midah owns a chain of bakeries in Johor Bahru. She is a person who always puts her best foot forward and she is planning to expand her business to other major cities like Melaka, Seremban and Singapore.

          As a single mother, Mak Su Midah always works hard to provide for her three sons. Although she is busy with her business, she always finds time to spend with them. She makes sure they have dinner together. During school holidays, Mak Su Midah would also take some time off to take her sons for a vacation. Her sons are doing very well in school as they are very disciplined and focused. Mak Su Midah is a good role model not only to me, but also to her sons.

          Although she is very successful, Mak Su Midah is very humble, modest and respectful to everyone. She is also supportive towards her siblings and never fails to help anyone who is in trouble. Sometime ago, my father was in a financial distress and Mak Su Midah stepped up and helped him to solve his problem. I have learnt to be like her in this respect. She always says that helping others brings her joy.

          Mak Su Midah is also always understanding and supportive towards me. As a young child, I used to play with her and I even broke her favourite vase, but she was very patient with me and never lost her temper. Besides that she always encourages me to study hard and reminds me to stay focused. She is like a friend to me and also the favourite aunt of all her nephews and nieces.     [CONCLUDE?]